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Reviews for "Alex Seryoua: Episode I"

Alright, I suppose...

Good for a starter episode, but I felt there was many flaws to whole design and setup of the story. The backrounds were great and it was a neat art style, but I felt like it didn't flow too well. A lot of the character movements were annoyingly unnatural and tweens felt choppy. The whole story had holes in it, even for a first episode. There wasn't much setup to the character or the whole setting in general, like the story quickly changed to a person talking to being abducted by aliens, without much detail described about the main character.

I see what kind of style you're trying to create, and I like that, but I think if you work a little harder on the basic setting and the animation, it could turn out much, much better.

Interesting, but it took a wrong turn somewhere

The first half of the Movie, where she was in the car, that was Top-knotch. The voice acting is spot-on and we can really feel for Alex.
But the Second half, after she's on this Alien Base, It seems like a completly seperate movie. How did she learn to use the suit/implants so quickly? What exactly IS she wearing? Is her heart Supposed to be beating that fast, considering she's in a chemical Stasis? How did Earth miss the Alien base on the moon?
The animations feel wierd and forced, as if you weren't entirely sure of the Actual motions of beings in 3-d space. When she's Panicking in the Stasis cell, I could not help but laugh as she looked like she was Dancing a little tap-dance number. I don't like how she became a Silent Protagonist once on the base when mere Minutes ago she was a very normal 20-something woman with a deadbeat boyfriend. An 'Oh my God' would have been sufficient.

All in All, it feels Disjointed.

half life

pretty cool i guess. keep it up. cant wait for next one

It has pros and cons

I do see some potential, but you have some work to do.

Many people asked why does she have a suit that could kill the aliens, why would she wake up under the control of the aliens, etc. You attack the people that ask those questions.

There is two problems. First, you shouldn't attack those people. It would only hurt you, so why do it? Second, you didn't left anything to hang onto other then what is going to happen next. The movie feels like it has a lot of loop holes instead of something you have to wait for to be explained.

Kinda sparse.

The animation was good, but not a style I'm sure fits with the type of tone you're trying to achieve.

Sound was decent in terms of quality and how it fit, but there wasn't enough sound effects...if you hear a sound in space once, there's no reason you shouldn't hear another sound after. Basically, just more sound effects. The lack of sound makes it seem really sparse. (Also was not a big fan of the alarm.)

Seems too easy she broke out and started attacking that quickly, but I guess it's cool. It would make a good game idea.

I thought her ending up on the moon is a bit...eh...predictable or too easy.

I think you owe it to yourself to make these works LONGER, not shorter. You can accomplish more that way.

Keep it up, though.